Second part is way better. You should bring out typical characteristics more like you did with Peter's long face... For example Mikael isn't that skinny
Haha that is the only reason I'm making it! Just finished page 3, but I don't have a flash disk to put it on this computer with internet access. cheers for the comments so far though!
Awesome art, but get TOP_OPTH_FAN to write the scripts
To those of you who dismiss comics, there are many excellent stories in this format that rival literature, as an obvious example, the genius of Neil Gaiman's The Sandman. Requires a tad of imagination though.