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Followed the Reaper
You know what? I'll humor you and if you make a layout for a song I'll try to emulate it within reason.
OK, I made another one...
I realize you wouldn't do vocals but it's hard to visualize a song like this without the intended vocal sections included. This song has the feeling of traveling to a dark place that seems mysterious at first but is eventually a bad place to be in, it's like a dive to the abyss of the sea or a journey to the reaches of Hell, or it could be a blind man's journey to a pitch black forest
0:00 -
Melody that's tragic and beautiful.
Perilous riff beating on the background to create a sense of contrast, 60 bpm.
0:20 -
Same beat & tempo, but melody changes to mysterious dark trance keyboard melody, heavy but low-profile riff.
0:35 -
Verse 1 hissing vocals start, beat speeds up to 100 bpm.
0:50 -
Verse 2 vocals slightly louder, pedal is added with a pumping bass to create sense of fearful pulse.
1:05
Music goes on with a faint scream.
1:20 -
Intro riff & 60 bpm beat return with whispering vocals.
1:35 -
Two back-to-back orchestral hits and a calm/tragic choir in background seize the moment to emulate the sense of full moon and nightfall, beat stops.
1:50 -
Intro riff with the 60 bpm beat return after a moment of tranquil stillness, choirs still humming in the midst.
2:05 -
Orchestral hit stirs up the unaware listener, pedal tempo increases to 180 bpm with ultra fast lower string riff.
2:15 -
Two back-to-back orchestral hits start a double-bass attack with the riff.
2:25 -
Death metal tremolo (chorus) riff/melody emerges from underneath the simple drum pattern, beat settles at 140 bpm. First half of the tremolo chorus without vocals, just to enjoy the change of feeling.
2:40 -
Beat stays at 140 bpm to carry on the increased drama. Low grand piano supporting the intro riff.
3:00 -
Tempo comes down to 60 bpm to respect a slow, melodic guitar solo with great echo to give a sense of immersion in some deep place.
3:25 -
Verse beat comes back to cool off the guitar solo.
3:40 - 4:07
Tremolo chorus brings mood back to this burning anxiety. When repeating again at 4:00 the tempo increases to inhumane speed with doublebass over choirs and burying the end scream.
So there's 1 guitar melody at the intro, 1 very simple trance melody, 1 guitar solo, 1 tremolo melody, and really just 1 fairly simple riff... and some other necessary shit you can come up with in a heartbeat. I only worried about the energetic flow. I had certain bands in mind when envisioning this, but I won't name them cos everyone has their own imagination.
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