TaylorC, I like it...but...
You think you could make it a little more symmetrical? You know?
You definitely got the "wispy" look, and it has a slightly tribal feel as well...but...Funeral Portrait has a point. There's something off about it. It just looks a little offcenter and asymmetrical, and that causes it to look amateurish as a result. I realize that it's a first draft. If you can balance it out and make it a TAD less 'sloppy' looking, that will be perfect.
Again, thanks a bunch!