Death metal mix - give me your worst!

[nevchrist]

Rough and ready for your brutal criticism

(I added the phaser during the master so it doesn't fit right - it was just an afterthought.)

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5831187/riff idea july_11_11.wav

or if that fails to work:

http://soundcloud.com/la-tigre/riff-ideas-july-11-11

 

[nevchrist]

Reviving this fail of a thread. Could do with some feedback please, gentlemen?

 

[RaNk]

It sounds brutal, but there's way too much reverb on it for my taste. Also the guitar sound is kinda harsh, but maybe that's what you're after.