DT-forum-song round 2

Tritonus

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Ok.... You all know the rules! This is Dtunf's, or whatever our name is, second track:


Write a DT-forum-song!

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Write a DT-forum-song!

Ok. Many of you might just think this thread is idiotic, but anyway. Here’s the deal!

We write a song together

I start with ONE word and you just fill in

OBS punctuation marks are NOT words and may be used whenever you find the sentence ready.

You can stop somebody else’s sentence by putting a punctuation mark in front of your own word.

If you write (chorus) / x 2 / (verse) / (intro) / (ad libitum) / (con bocca chusa) etc this may NOT be classified as a word, rather a punctuation mark.

PLEASE try to be serious and write a good song. DT must not be ashamed. I will add that as a rule.

DT MUST NOT BE ASHAMED!

Example:

Tri. I

Plintus: I love

Siren: I love to

UC: I love to fuck

6SF (thinks the sentence is finished even though UC did not): I love to fuck! (chorus) Do

Siren: I love to fuck! (chorus) Do you

Plintus: I love to fuck! (chorus) Do you like

Rampy: I love to fuck! (chorus) Do you like dogs?



And so it goes on!!!!!



Edit: Prepostitions does NOT count as YOUR word.

Edit2: The same goes for linking words (if you want to)

Edit3:
Guide!!!
Try to follow the obvious rythm and do give the others tips how to follow if you decide to reorginaze the structure of the song.
You may finish the song when you believe it finished and you do this by writing a little note after your last dot.
In a song like this the message can easily be missinturpretated, but please do try not to write whatever and try to build a resonable base. This is at this stage ( which is after "promises" )´almost inpossible, but keep up the good work untill the next song and try to remember this then.
Use the chorus more then once and do not make the verses too long and monotonous!
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OK... I've edited it now.... Go on


Exagerated
 
Exaggerated from the start,
An age of truth, and rampaging silliness.
Forged from eternal bliss it now smarts
 
Exaggerated from the start,
An age of truth, and rampaging silliness.
Forged from eternal bliss it now smarts
Nevertheless


Remember that we said we should try to make it serious
 
Exaggerated from the start,
An age of truth, and rampaging silliness.
Forged from eternal bliss, it now smarts
Nevertheless forgotten is all forgiveness.
Fallen i see
 
Exaggerated from the start,
An age of truth, and rampaging silliness.
Forged from eternal bliss, it now smarts
Nevertheless forgotten is all forgiveness.
Fallen i see thy empire

@hyena: Smarts? Did ye mean that or did ye mean starts? Because it doesn't make any sesnse... .
 
Exaggerated from the start,
An age of truth, and rampaging silliness.
Forged from eternal bliss, it now smarts
Nevertheless forgotten is all forgiveness.
Fallen i see thy empire in ruins
Calamity finding
 
Exaggerated from the start,
An age of truth, and rampaging silliness.
Forged from eternal bliss, it now smarts
Nevertheless forgotten is all forgiveness.
Fallen i see thy empire in ruins
Calamity finding thy passion