have i made this pro mastered clip sound better?

[jesterroot4]

so heres the original! mixed and mastered at a pro studio:

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=8884

and then i had a twiddle with it, and made it sound like this...

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/50835_weeohweweemaster.mp3

have i made it better or worse....?

 

[fabz]

Nope it sounds distorted an squashed! It's pumping like crazy! It's louder, but not better *IMHO*

 

[Soundlurker]

Parts of it have average RMS of -4db and it has sooo much low end under 60hz

pumping is putting it mildly

 

[Ermz]

This is a perfect example to my thread.. Why to leave mastering to mastering studios.

 

[Tym_ex]

Haha man, you want to be the Hitler of the loudless war? Sorry about that

 

[discordless]

yeah but unfortunetaly he ll loose

 

[jesterroot4]

lol haha the loudness and compression try to ignor haha i was trying to think about the tone... but i doo agree.. its sounds way too pushed!

was just messing around.. lol kewl kewl

 

[Jarkko Mattheiszen]

Heh, distorts and pumps like hell
Check out Moonlapse's thread. He's got a point there.