- Jun 14, 2008
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Hey,
I already posted this in the Kat. forum but that forum gets very little activity so I thought I'd post it here.
I wrote this lyric today and I'd like some feedback on it. What do you think?
My voice sounds a little like Jonas Rensky's btw.
Jake
I already posted this in the Kat. forum but that forum gets very little activity so I thought I'd post it here.
I wrote this lyric today and I'd like some feedback on it. What do you think?
Cessation
I take one step
And weigh the odds
Follow my prints
As I am lost
I’m lost within
This tainted, foul
Soliloquy
I’m sick of this
Of this madness,
And loneliness
Sick of this vile,
That bubbles from
This retched and
Fetid miasma
I long for closure
For departure
From this twisted
And dismal world
I take this step
My final step
For cessation
I take one step
And weigh the odds
Follow my prints
As I am lost
I’m lost within
This tainted, foul
Soliloquy
I’m sick of this
Of this madness,
And loneliness
Sick of this vile,
That bubbles from
This retched and
Fetid miasma
I long for closure
For departure
From this twisted
And dismal world
I take this step
My final step
For cessation
My voice sounds a little like Jonas Rensky's btw.
Jake