me whoring out another story

[dreaming neon darkspot]

http://storywrite.com/poem/1649574

it's froma a while ago, and the writing was kinda rushed since i wrote it in about a half an hour, like the other one, but i just wanted to post it here to see if anyone really "got" it since i've gotten maybe one comment on it and i was just really proud of the plot and wanted to get more feedback.

thanks
~Laura

 

[Lunar Still]

Hahaha, no way....I should have known I'd find you here as well!