a few stylistic niggles, "might be better as...."
Iron Maiden, Judas Priest, and Metallica advanced the genre and made it more popular. It took until the 1980s for this to happen.
"Iron Maiden, Judas Priest, and Metallica in the 1980s popularized the genre"
Although it has never been considered a mainstream or popular genre; metal has millions of fans worldwide usually referred to as “headbangers” or “metalheads.”
"While metal hasn't been a mainstream genre it is one growing in popularity, having millions of fans worldwide, typically called...
North America and Europe are the main contributors to metal. Particularly Britain and Scandinavia of Europe. There are many sub-genres of metal, some popular some underground. But all with distinct sounds and styles.
vague and not tied in with anything else. you might want to bring up western europe and north america right at the start, suggesting "metal is a genre which flourished mainly in...."
Heavy metal is usually dominated by a strong guitar and drum sound. The common line-up for a metal band is a lead singer, lead guitarist, rhythm guitarist, bassist and drummer. Sometimes a keyboard player or even another guitarist is added to the roster.
Comparison would be helpful here. strong meaning what? loud? dominant? bold? is it different to rock somehow, or is that something it shares in common?
also, do you mean 'heavy metal' as the subgenre of 'metal' music itself?---black metal has a weak mid-EQ range'less guitar sound to be more dark and haunting, not what I would consider 'strong' a la Hammerfall and general heavy/power metal guitar sounds.
The common line-up for a metal band is a lead singer, lead guitarist, rhythm guitarist, bassist and drummer. Sometimes a keyboard player or even another guitarist is added to the roster.
would be better stated beforehand---that which constitutes a typical metal band, then what that sound is like.
Lyrical themes often include death, religion, fiction, poetry, fantasy, drugs, and mythology.
rather passive. often metal is pro mysticism/paganism/etc but ANTI-"religious" particularly. and not only 'death' but rather than emo shit about dying and suicide it's often misanthropic (evil?) and pro-death, and about 'murders' and other 'sinister' and agressive acts.
be more descriptive here to show how the genre addresses these topics.
Many stereotype metal fans as dumb drug addicts who are always angry.
"'Metalheads' are typically caricatured as unintelligent, quiet, psychotic, disordered drug users dressing in an almost gothic manner. This is far from the reality"
But they don’t know metal or even listen to it. People will hear one metal song and think every other one is like that. But that’s completely wrong, out of all the genres I know and listen to metal is definitely the most varied and unique.
out of place. Include the idea that "metal's subgenres are equally as unique as varied as those of dance music (it's proponents able to distinguish 'trance' from 'psytrance' while it's all psychotic 300bpm repetativeness to the rest of us ignorant of it's finer points) or classical, or even rock (with pop, punk, grunge, whatever...)" where you earlier speak about the line-up and general composition style, and production atmosphere
Yes there are brutal songs with growls and very heavy instruments.
heavy instruments, like a Tuba?
Yes there are brutal songs with growls and very heavy instruments. But there is also metal with clean vocals and melodic guitar riffs.
this stuff should be all up with the basic rundown of the various styles/subgenres produced from that basic metal band quintet setup. (also, tell them 'clean vocals' means typical "singing" lol, it is a jargon term after all)
Black Sabbath basically created the genre in 1969 with their heavy, doom sound. But many hard rock bands influenced the movement like AC/DC, Jimi Hendrix and Van Halen. Bands such as Megadeth and Motorhead brought metal out of the underground and furthered the development of the genre.
not sure this shit is necessary. all that name dropping furthers things nothing more than your succinct 'iron maiden etc' bit at the stard did. but if you use this, it should be included at the start
Many bands and genres gained underground, cult statuses and remained unpopular.
status*
This is one of the many things I love about metal. Music these days is so fake and lacks talent. But metal is very skilled and they aren’t in it for the money..
evidenced by what? what music these days is 'fake' and why? is that about the images of musicians, or about who creates their music for them, or what (Because things have been that fake since Elvis) so what makes 'these days' even unique in that?
You lip-synch a song written by a 50 year old man and you’re automatically a millionaire.
sync*
and lip-syncing is mouthing while a recording is played. you might 'cover' an existing famous song (as all the greats in pop music do) but you might 'lip-sync' your own recordings at a concert.
The 5 main sub-genres of metal are Death, Black, Thrash, Doom and Power. Each with a very distinct sound and style.
nice and concise, but should be mentioned up where you speak about the setup n everything.
Metal continues to grow in the modern world.
"in the modern world" is superfluous
and persists to pump out great music time after time.
continues to be original? according to who? compared to what? is it improving/evolving, diversifying? is this any different to any genre?
I have been listening to metal for years and it’s unlike anything I’ve ever heard. It’s the most incredible thing ever invented by man in my opinion.
it's good to leave yourself out of the topic (or fuck at least validate why it is better than man's other great inventions like soap, philosophy, the internet, the engine, medicine, heart-transplants, condoms, abortion, etc.)
I wish people would not assume the genre is all the same though because its so versatile, and there’s something for everyone with metal. There’s light, heavy, dark, positive, brutal, epic, and whatever else you want to say. I think metal is amazing because it has stayed real for all these years and is still a dominant genre.
maybe mention that before you detail the constituent aspects of the 5 main sub-genres so that it provides as example for this statement