change some of the velocity hits on the ride at times, they sound really fake
if your drummer really played it like that, tell him to put some dynamics into it
i think the background guitar that comes in at 43 seconds needs to be a little bit louder. when i do center panned guitars, i usually put a reverb on it, track insert, and make sure that its a stereo track so even though the audio is mono, the mono signal will go into the reverb, but out of the reverb will be stereo audio. if its a cool reverb plugin, it will make the mono guitar wider and spread it out over the stereo spectrum. do that, and turn it up a bit.
your hi hat sounds like its coming from the middle, it should be more on the left, but im being really really picky here... if you used dfkhs, make sure that stereo reverse is on before exporting the track
is there a bass in this recording? i can't hear it very well...