Okay, so i'm about to send something to someone in the hope he'll give me the job mixing his black metal band's ep, this'll be my first paid work, so naturally I really want it
Thing is, with my "audition piece", there's something I just can't quite get right about it, and I have no idea how to fix it, it just sounds like cardboard, so any help would be appreciated beyond all imaginable words
ps, no automation in there yet, and i've just realised the snare is quite loud...
https://soundcloud.com/jack-baker/bm-adam-bounce
Edit: the guys' brief for what he wanted was "old school, not kreig but not modern and overproduced"
have I achieved that at all? i was using dissection loosely as a reference
Edit 2: Here's a more boxy and ambient mix, which fits the brief better in your opinion/ways to make either one of them better?
https://soundcloud.com/jack-baker/black-metal-for-adam-2
Thing is, with my "audition piece", there's something I just can't quite get right about it, and I have no idea how to fix it, it just sounds like cardboard, so any help would be appreciated beyond all imaginable words
ps, no automation in there yet, and i've just realised the snare is quite loud...
https://soundcloud.com/jack-baker/bm-adam-bounce
Edit: the guys' brief for what he wanted was "old school, not kreig but not modern and overproduced"
have I achieved that at all? i was using dissection loosely as a reference
Edit 2: Here's a more boxy and ambient mix, which fits the brief better in your opinion/ways to make either one of them better?
https://soundcloud.com/jack-baker/black-metal-for-adam-2