Another Poetry Game, only one word at a time please.

[hibernal_dream]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness
Obscured

 

[Russell]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness
Obscured by

 

[TyrantOfFlames]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness
Obscured by my

 

[TyrantOfFlames]

Originally posted by Johan
This is the worst poem I've ever read

I'm inclined to agree. It's pretty rambling. There are alot of cases in which people didn't read the rest of the poem before puttin a word, and also cases in which the meaning of a word was mistaken. I try to tie it together a bit, but my influence alone can't do anything, as I can only put one word at a time...

 

[Opet]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness
Obscured by my own...


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Yeah. It's pretty meaningless, but fun. One line seems to be good, then the next just makes you want to say "No, no, no."

 

[S4R]

Originally posted by TyrantOfFlames


I'm inclined to agree. It's pretty rambling. There are alot of cases in which people didn't read the rest of the poem before puttin a word, and also cases in which the meaning of a word was mistaken. I try to tie it together a bit, but my influence alone can't do anything, as I can only put one word at a time...

We are simply trying to have fun, not write the declaration of independence.

 

[_Transparent_]

Originally posted by Soul4Raziel



We are simply trying to have fun, not write the declaration of independence.

well your old enough to know that opeth and fun don't mix. , its all serious stuff with opeth

 

[Mikael is God]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness
Obscured by my own lustful

 

[Duvall]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness
Obscured by my own lustful nightmares



yee, just latched onto this thread..

 

[Ihsahn]

OK its time to get a little black metal here...

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness
Obscured by my own lustful nightmares
Forests...

Lets just go along with the forest theme.

 

[Candelabrum]

woven

 

[S4R]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness
Obscured by my own lustful nightmares
Forests woven deep...

 

[D Mullholand]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness
Obscured by my own lustful nightmares
Forests woven deep fears

 

[TyrantOfFlames]

It keeps feeling more and more like a bunch of words thrown together...should we start over?

 

[Russell]

Sounds good 2 me

 

[Orchid]

What sounds good to you?

I'll go, then.

Dazzled

 

[hibernal_dream]

Dazzled by

 

[Opet]

Dazzled by her...

 

[_Transparent_]

dazzled by her fragile...

 

[Orchid]

Dazzled by her fragile scent