BACK ONCE AGAIN WITH THE RENEGADE MASTER! help please :(

[RichMinerva]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3320336/HELPPLEASE!2.mp3

im genuinely bamboozled on where to go now :/

 

[RichMinerva]

second song

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3320336/clarkys.mp3

 

[RichMinerva]

nobody? lame

 

[RichMinerva]

Genuinly need help!

 

[P-E]

I'm kind of in a rush but that's what I gathered after a listen of each song : vox at the beginning of first one needs a bit of pitch correction IMO, vox could be a bit brighter and don't sound upfront enough, guitars are a bit too smooth but are probably fine, bass could use much more grit, drums sound kinda plasticky and lack highs. Hope this helped! (To be honest, I think most of your mixes are much better.)

 

[RichMinerva]

Thanks pancake man I'll give it a shot

 

[P-E]

No problem man.

 

[RichMinerva]

anyone else?!

 

[RichMinerva]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3320336/updatedavolent.mp3 updated

 

[RichMinerva]

update http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3320336/updatedavolent2.mp3