Grind/Death Style. First Mix Ever. Please Tear it Apart and Give Some Feedback

[ALaz666]

Hi guys,
I inherited some gear and decided to learn the art of the metal mix. This is the first song I've done and would like to get some feedback if possible. I know you guys get a lot of this, but feedback from your very trained ears would be very useful to me. There's some really awesome stuff posted on this board and I can only hope I'll be able to get close to the level of quality around here at some point.

This is a death/grind style song called Burnt. I think this is as far as I can take my current gear that I inherited.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/oota70regrash6v/Burnt - Rough Mix 008.mp3

 

[ALaz666]

I'd like to note that there's no bass present on this either...still looking for someone to lay down some tracks.

 

[ALaz666]

Dang, 54 hits with no replies.

That bad eh?

Back to the drawing board.