I'm recording this band on Monday

huuge improvement that demo was ridiculous, although id say the vocals need come down a little but that's my only complaint
 
improvement :)

my 2 cents:

- kick could be tighter/louder. idem for snare, they would need to hit louder
- vocal less "on top"
- guitar more in front of the mix
 
you def helped them out but it seems like no matter how much you help them..there singer is still gonna suck at screaming lol...kick ass job though man they actually kinda sound like a band now
 
O man i thought you did the demo first.....you did them a major service although i say bring the guitars a bit more forward playing them through run of the mill speakers with a sub and im hearing a LOAD o bass. Everything else is good though!