Inspired

Nice work on your lyrics Ryan.

Thanks. Here is another:

=[[The Haunting Tale]]=

[I- INTRO]

Satan was thrown out of paradise.
Thrown into the fire and ice.
Underneath he dwells.
Just listen closer and hear the song of the bells.
Temptation is his name.
Damnation is his GAME!

[II- Crow Song]

In the wasteland the crow stands still.
On the oldest tree upon the hill.
Waiting for a weakling to kill.
Armies of crows behind the leader of them all.
Fighting for the crown. Can you hear their call?

Fallen angels rise again.
Building up anger in the lions den.
Upon the dead tree is perched Lucifer.
Can you sense his deadly lure?
He's calling you.
He's seeping through...
...Through your skin.
THE SEED OF SIN!

Singing the crow song.
It's been far too long.
Singing in the night you hear his cry.
Singing, "Your days ahead are nigh!"
The devil in disguise. FLY OH FLY!
...AND PLEASE DON'T LET ME DIE!

[III- War Within]

The devil has planted the seed of sin.
Thus begins the war within.

I stand in silence guarding my heart.
Temptation seems a work of art.
I must step away!
...But I don't have all day!

I must flee from sin before the sun goes down.
I must rise from the waters before I drown.

Satan swoops down from the shattering sky.
Today might be the day I die.
...But I must carry on.
I must move forward when the pleasure is gone.
Satan comes in many disguises.
Satan truly hypnotizes.

Satan's sword is aimed at my soul.
I must fight better in the night so dull.
It's hard to keep moving when your cup's no longer full.

I stand in silence. I dare not speak a word.
I must fight within, the haunting bird.
Satan wants the crown.
LORD, he's pulling me down.

[IV- Running In The Night]

Running in the night.
Looking for the light.
I'm looking for a better sight.
I can't survive so far away.
So far away from the light of the day.

Temptation is great.
Temptation is fierce.
Oh venom of fate.
Like a snake it does pierce.
RUN AWAY!
FROM NIGHT TO DAY!

[V- The Great Battle]

Satan strikes the sun with rays of dark.
His "powers" can't even leave a mark.
Clouds of venom building up in the sky.
The devil will fall so he better not try.
YET HE WON'T BACK DOWN!
He still strives for the crown.

Standing at the top of a tower.
Satan can't defeat God's power.
What a fool!
What a fool!

Only one force that remains all powerful.
HERE I STAND!
HERE I STAND!
Under the hand of of the LORD!
Raising high the mighty sword!
It will com crashing down...
...On the devil!

[VI- Satan Defeated]

Satan flies through burning skies.
Satan lives in many lies.
He's come to take the crown.
To take God's glory down.

Satan's destined to fall.
He's up against the wall.

The Savior plants the saber into Satan's chest.
Satan shall fall though he's trying his best.
For he is far too weak...
...at his very highest peak!

Satan reaches for the crown he sees...
...But he's been thrown into the fiery seas.

GOD IS THE KING and forever more shall be.
God is king for all eternity!

In the wastelands the crow no longer stands.
Christ defeated him when blood dripped from his hands.
 
Ok I am gonna post more: (2, I know they are no good lol)

-[Ashes In The Wind]-

Ashes in the wind fly past
Memories fading on so fast
Gone they will be soon
With the night of the blackened moon

The hourglass has shattered
The walls completely battered
No knowing of tomorrow
Chrystal tears of sorrow

Into the flame of war
Through the eerie dimensional door
Shall I be or be no more?
By this terror I'm shaken to the core

One final stand to face this madness
One more tear of lonely sadness
Tomorrow is the end
It's just around the bend

One more tear
But must there be no fear
Your words I truly hear
Roaring o'er the night so clear

Tragedy has faded with the cries of distant times
Echoing in the night like sacred rhymes.
All my lies and all my crimes.

All gone with the wind of yesterday
All my dreams are fading away
...But sorrow dies at last
All dark times are past

Mystery dies
There are no more lies
There are no more cries

The final piece is placed
My wrongdoing erased
AND I ASCEND WITH YOU
To the top of skies so blue

Ashes in the wind fly past
Memories fading on so fast
Gone they will be soon
With the night of the final moon

-[What Awaits]-

All mystery surrounding me
All cloaked by blood. I cannot see
All sin comes near
I'm filled with fear
Teardrops glisten
No one will listen
God's words forgotten
Our souls are rotten
Whitewashed tombs
Behold your dooms

A silent moon awaits
Here at heaven's gates
The final night
The final fight
Here in the dark
You all wear the mark
The devil is your king
You've lost everything
Your fading away
You die today

Snares in the road
You can't drop your heavy load
Lust is bittersweet
In the end it's defeat
Crushed you are
Falling far
Nothing is present
A king is but a pheasant
The end has come
Do you hear the drum?

The LORD is waiting
He is recreating
A new heaven and a new hell
Hear eternity and doomsday's bell?
Two paths to go by
Either live or die
Sink or swim
Die or be with him
Follow the LORD
Flee from Satan's horde

:headbang::headbang: So what do you think?
 
Not bad, but not the best lyrics ever :p (I think I'm unable to write better ones though lol)

They're things that I like a lot, and things that I judge as "neutral" (I'm not angry when I listen to it, but it's not a great thing).

You all wear the mark
Which mark are you talking about ? The mark of the beast ? (Satan !!!)

I won't comment the lyrics now, sorry, but I may do it when I'll have time :)
 
Yes... that one. It is at the end of the world. The people who are following him. It's a lil' bit dark I know but it isn't blasphemy.
 
Yes... that one. It is at the end of the world. The people who are following him. It's a lil' bit dark I know but it isn't blasphemy.
I didn't say it was blasphemy :)
If you speak about something dark, it's not blasphemy ! For exemple : if you speak about people who don't follow God and the way they take therefore, it's not blasphemy.
 
Good just making sure you're following me. Because that is what it is. BTW I have written about 300 songs/poems yet and not all are here... here are some more in this list of links (some may start with songs I've already showed you so just scroll down to see more in the linked files, because these are all parts of series'):

If you do not like one of the series' just skip to another. And no this is still not all of mine.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LegoDude1995/Random/1-_ashes_in_the_wind.txt
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LegoDude1995/Random/28-_wasteland.txt
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LegoDude1995/Random/king_of_kings.txt
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LegoDude1995/Random/24-_from_the_shadows.txt
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LegoDude1995/Random/30-_resurection.txt
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LegoDude1995/Random/21-_night_of_discontent.txt
 
A short one I did a few nights ago.

-[The Only]-

Demons yelling in the night.
Screams of terror. Screams of fright.
The only thing I see is a flickering light.
An hourglass tells when I'm to die.
PLEASE JUST TELL ME WHY!
WHY DO I BELIEVE THIS LIE?

Reaching out with bleeding hands.
Reaching beyond the shattered lands.
I THE WOLF CRY, LONELY!
BECAUSE I AM THE ONLY!

The fallen ones arise.
Spewing at me, lies.
The Lady of Grey Eyes...
HER EVIL GRIN DOES HYPNOTIZE!
Here I am!
dwelling in the shadows.
Here I am!
Hanging in the gallows.

Misty eyes of hypnotists.
...YOU PUT ME TO SLEEP!
Black fog of the satanists.
...THOUGH IT IS NEVER DEEP!
Eyes of terror, eyes of hate.
Destroyer, we can't recreate.

Reaching out with bleeding hands.
Reaching beyond the shattered lands.
I THE WOLF CRY, LONELY!
BECAUSE I AM THE ONLY!

Midnight is here.
Feel the gloom.
Filled with fear.
Trapped in this room.
These bloody walls.
MY MIND CANNOT ERASE!
Many angel's falls.
I AM LOST IN THIS HAUNTED PLACE!

Reaching out with bleeding hands.
Reaching beyond the shattered lands.
I THE WOLF CRY, LONELY!
BECAUSE I AM THE ONLY!

The light is getter brighter.
The room is getting lighter.
The demons fade.
The debt's already paid.
Here I am in this resurrected place.
I am lost in your never ending grace.

Reaching out with pleading hands.
Reaching into better lands.
I WILL NEVER AGAIN BE LONELY!
BECAUSE YOU ARE THE ONLY!

Daylight is here.
Oh the mercy.
Farewell to fear.
You're so good to me.
Another call I hear.

MY MIND CANNOT ERASE!
...THE BLOODY MARKS OF YOUR SAVING GRACE
 
BTW many characters in my stuff are based off of the bible and my nightmares... and things that happened to me. The foundation is the bible though.
 
You're a very good lyricist Ryan, I'm very impressed with what you can do, you write way beyond your age. Keep plugging away. One of the good things about writing lots of stuff is you've got a plethora of material to use in the future, if you either find a band to work with or start playing in a band.

And when you love writing, you'll continue no matter what. Writing is a great way to express how you feel. I've written about 550 since starting 15 or so years ago, but now I'm married and have a family it takes a back seat, so I only write about one a month.

Keep up the work, you're doing great Ryan

Fundy
 
Another one:

-[The War]-

[I- Fallen Angels]

Holding high the sword
Fiery waves are crashing
The Devil's evil horde
Gives me the lashing

Walking through the wasteland
Raise the mighty flame
Blood drips from my hand
In this bloody game
Scorch the angels golden strand
These seas you said were tame

Another fallen angel born
Fallen from above
Another warrior's been torn
Another turns away from love

[II- Alone]

Born into the depths of hell
Washed upon the shore
A demon sounds the midnight bell
The time has come for war

When demons fight
I feel the defeat
When I see no light
I fall to my feet
On this gloomy night
I take a sorrowful seat

I can't do this all alone
For I am dying
Sorrow dissolving every bone
Fallen, crying

Because it can't be done
No it can't be won
...ALONE!

[III- Salvation]

You are my salvation
Consistently taking the blows
The savior from damnation
Why am I one of the ones you chose?

I CAN'T THANK YOU MORE!
You defeated the demons and my sin
YOU SAVED ME FROM THE WAR!
Yes you crushed all death within
SO WHAT IS MY LIFE FOR?
When shall the great journey begin?

No power
Demons can't get any nearer
In the tower
Vision comes to me much clearer

Holding high the sword
Fiery waves no longer crashing
The Devil's evil horde
Gives me not another lashing