Got Bored... SO I DID THIS! (Off-Topic)

Ryan M.

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Got bored... so I wrote some stuff... enjoy... maybe... maybe NOT! These are only a few of mine... very few. I have over 100. like 150 i believe.


-[Night of Discontent]-

Sorrow comes gliding down.
Wearing her scarlet gown.
In the moonlight.
In the dead night.
Skeletal fingers reaching out.
Her tears of pain. Her tears of doubt.
Her fiery eyes of discontent.
Sorrowful is her midnight descent.
From the shadows of the darkest hour.
Swooping down from the clock tower.

Candlelit gloom.
So close to doom.
Locked inside this haunted room.
The ruins of my broken heart.
They try to recreate a work of art...
...But I fall down.
Face to face with sorrow in her scarlet gown.

...I see her face of tears.
Torn down by such sorrowful years.

I am all alone.
Lost in this zone.
Wearing down to the bone.

I scream for help. I scream for you.
My only fear is that my fate is true.
Is there something I should do?

Sorrow comes gliding down.
Wearing her scarlet gown.
In the moonlight.
In the dead night.
Skeletal fingers reaching out.
Her tears of pain. Her tears of doubt.
Her fiery eyes of discontent.
Sorrowful is her midnight descent.
From the shadows of the darkest hour.
Swooping down from the clock tower.

Night of discontent.

=[[Deception's Mask]]=-


In the fields of joy I run.
Dancing in the bright bright sun.
Summer is here.
No need to fear.
Not another dripping tear.

I met my beloved in the dark.
I lit the path. I made a spark.
I saw a glowing door ahead.
I took her hand. Not another word said.

Honey dripping from her lips.
It hid the blood on her fingertips.
Deception masked by words of "love".
Dripping blood 'neath the glove.
The crow was painted as a dove.
This paints the picture of deception.
It also shows my severe infection.
I was addicted to A LIE!
The clouds hiding fire in the sky.
Desolate fountains.
Sinking mountains.
I thought she would quench my thirst.
She seemed so perfect at first.

In the dessert with my head down.
In the sea of quicksand I shall drown.
Despair is my guide tonight.
I'll go my way without a light.
I am blind and in need of sight.
Souring vultures wait for me.
I am dying... They can see.
Is this the end? How could it be?

I wish I knew my love was lust.
The illusion fades into the dust.
Decaying, decrupped, and covered in rust.
I need a light...
...To win the fight...
...All through the night.

-[The City On The Other Side]-

[Verse 1]

The city on the other side.
The city that the mountains hide.
This world has forgotten it's existence.
But we pursue paradise. We can't fight the resistance.
We know there is a world beyond this place.
A city so beautiful, no one could ever trace.
It's your choice.
Climb the mountains.
Hear the voice.
Drink of the fountains.

[Chorus]

The city that the mountains hide.
You dig your holes to get to the other side.
Digging holes will get you nowhere.
Walk that path if you dare!
There is only one way.
So climb the mountains night and day.
Through the fire.
Through the Ice.
A path so dire...
...TO PARADISE!
Oh!
PARADISE!

[Verse 2]

The city on the other side.
The city that the mountains hide.
This world has forgotten it's existence.
But we pursue paradise. We can't fight the resistance.
We walk false paths to paradise.
We walk through fire and through ice...
...Ignoring all of your advice!
So we must turn around!
We're lost children dying to be found.
So we listen to your voice.
Then we finally make the choice.
We hold your hand...
... As you carry us... to the holy land!

=== The Three Worlds===

[Word I]

[The Sin of Mankind]

This place seems so beautiful at first glance.
If you wanna have fun then this is your chance.
The streets are made of gold.
People singing young and old.
I party all night and sleep all day.
This is paradise I must say.
I'm starting to think that THIS IS THE WAY!
OH WAIT!
Corpses rising from the ground.
All the criminals come unbound.
All the lost ones wanting toe found.
When I lean my weight against the wall it shatters.
But in the eyes of the world nothing matters.
The walls of paper should be walls of stone.
This gloomy cell is eating me to the bone.
So I bow before your throne.
Forgiveness please.
Cure me of this foul disease.
There is cursing in the breeze.
I'm doomed!
I'm doomed!
...But wait!
This just can't be my fate!
So save me!
LORD SAVE ME!

[World II]

[The Devil]

Oh!
FIRE!
Fire spewing from your tongue you liar!
You lived a lie you faked your walk!
You really learned how to talk the talk.
Your mouth is a pit of flames.
Saying words, playing tames!
You are on the list of CURSED NAMES!
YOU WERE DAMNED!
Your walls of paper have been completely rammed.
RAMMED DOWN!
SO DROWN!
Drown in the PIT OF FIRE!
You can't escape this place you liar.
This place is like an eternal flame.
Burning you with the cursed name.
WELCOME TO THE PITS OF HELL!
WELCOME TO THE BURNING CELL!
Wish you could complain? WELL THERE'S NO ONE TO TELL!

[World III]

[A Voice So Bold]

Welcome to paradise.
Not a place where your fate is told by rolling dice.
I said it once and I'll say it twice!
WELCOME TO PARADISE!
Come with me and live for ever.
All my child let's be together!
Welcome to heaven.
The endless wish.
An endless sea...
... WITH SO MANY FISH!
Oh!
You made me an enemy.
But in the end I let you see...
... HOW MUCH YOU REALLY NEED ME!
I died for your sins.
And this is where the celebration begins...
IN PARADISE!
 
Okay I will just throw out some opinions I guess?

Honestly I would not mind listening to songs with these lyrics. WAY too many rhyming couplets for my tastes, personally...Like this for example makes a pretty sweet couplet

Honey dripping from her lips.
It hid the blood on her fingertips.

But I dunno seems like the emphasis is lost if it's just all over the place

Obviously there are shitloads of metal cliches, and not just all the hell/paradise stuff, I mean paper walls, scarlet gown, etc. And a lot of mixed imagery and melodrama, too "IN YOUR FACE" for me, but again that's personal opinion. I mean, this is like Theocracy/SX but even more blown out of proportion. I probably am not qualified to give "advice" but I'd say concentrate more on the message you want and less on trying to be as epic as possible

But if the music was good I would give it a listen
 
©2009-2010 Phanto:

I was walking down the street
I saw a cat
and it was fat
Then cast me into shades of gray


Thank you, thank you.
 
Okay I will just throw out some opinions I guess?

Honestly I would not mind listening to songs with these lyrics. WAY too many rhyming couplets for my tastes, personally...Like this for example makes a pretty sweet couplet



But I dunno seems like the emphasis is lost if it's just all over the place

Obviously there are shitloads of metal cliches, and not just all the hell/paradise stuff, I mean paper walls, scarlet gown, etc. And a lot of mixed imagery and melodrama, too "IN YOUR FACE" for me, but again that's personal opinion. I mean, this is like Theocracy/SX but even more blown out of proportion. I probably am not qualified to give "advice" but I'd say concentrate more on the message you want and less on trying to be as epic as possible

But if the music was good I would give it a listen

i respect your opinion