Lotus Eater Lyrics

I have a felling that the line:

Crops they were sold to die

should be

Crops they were sown to die (makes a nice visual metaphor too)

Great work getting all the words out though.
 
Some other stuff:

After all you fail the normal death / Life has aborted -> After all you fell in love with death / Life is a poison
A barren waste distant land -> A barren waste is your land
Suffer.. and safe from the world of sleep -> Sucked in and safe in the world of sleep
Fleeting is our roads, pushing your spirit away -> Fleeting in sorrow, pushing your spirit away
seeing the weakness of the sick -> Seeking the weakness of dislike
And the time of a mother, what goes in a mother's sigh -> And the pride of a mother, drawn close in a mother's son

Not totally sure, but meh.
 
I think "Cries out the restless will all so... die" might be better as "Cries out the restless will -also-... die" as that makes more sense right?

Just realized I was beat to that heh.
 
Maybe "various" instead of "warrior's" ?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Reading the word "warrior" in an Opeth song is quite.....strange :guh: