Ermz - agree with the comments above. The only other thing I thought of that wasn't already mentioned is, the guitar solo that pops in at 1:46 (which is repeated in the end of the song) has a lot of very subtle playing that is nearly inaudible on my side in spots. That should be brought out more I think.
It's a great, dynamic guitar piece (very David Gilmour like) - tone is good, but could use some more presence and sheen. But it sounds a bit too faint in spots (see from about 1:52 - 2:09 - really hard to hear the subtlety there).