Sometimes I wonder why ppl even post threads like this on COBOT. One would think there's lots of other places fit for the purpose. I mean, the only place less fit for constructive criticism than COBOT is /b/, and only barely.
I'd rate your band, man, but I'm in China and can't haz Utube. Do you guys have myspace or something? PM me if so.
NVM, found it. The R&R song is played decently well, guitarworks' good, but I think songwriting is the problem. It just doesn't sound very interesting somehow. As far as the vocals go, I can't say that clean vocals are bad (as far as clean vocals go anyway), but you guys need to get someone who can actually growl. It was pretty bad.
I liked the Acid Trip song a lot more than the R&R song. I can't say either song is very "metal". Not with that style of drums or vocals anyway. Nu-metal, maybe. But you don't want to be a nu-metal band
Overall, needs work of course, looks like you guys haven't quite found your style quite yet. I'd suggest working harder on songwriting, and either teaching the vocalist to sing better, or to sing less
And well, all of what Enemy242 said. He probably has more experience in these things than I do