The 'Poems are shit' thread
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Forlorn Hope
leave me alone
pointless? then i'm in deffo!
'you were a poet and a painter, and now you're a killer of a white man. that weapon will replace your tongue. you will learn to speak through it and your poetry will now be written with blood.'
'you were a poet and a painter, and now you're a killer of a white man. that weapon will replace your tongue. you will learn to speak through it and your poetry will now be written with blood.'
Bambi
Villain of the piece
yeah on passing the new menin gate...an irish airman forsees his death .....the essence of man there
John Keats - Hyperion
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Deep in the shady sadness of a vale
Far sunken from the healthy breath of morn,
Far from the fiery noon, and eve's one star,
Sat gray-hair'd Saturn, quiet as a stone,
Still as the silence round about his lair;
Forest on forest hung about his head
Like cloud on cloud. No stir of air was there,
Not so much life as on a summer's day
Robs not one light seed from the feather'd grass,
But where the dead leaf fell, there did it rest.
A stream went voiceless by, still deadened more
By reason of his fallen divinity
Spreading a shade: the Naiad 'mid her reeds
Press'd her cold finger closer to her lips.
_____________________
Deep in the shady sadness of a vale
Far sunken from the healthy breath of morn,
Far from the fiery noon, and eve's one star,
Sat gray-hair'd Saturn, quiet as a stone,
Still as the silence round about his lair;
Forest on forest hung about his head
Like cloud on cloud. No stir of air was there,
Not so much life as on a summer's day
Robs not one light seed from the feather'd grass,
But where the dead leaf fell, there did it rest.
A stream went voiceless by, still deadened more
By reason of his fallen divinity
Spreading a shade: the Naiad 'mid her reeds
Press'd her cold finger closer to her lips.
Don Corleone
Emre
Life means all that it ever meant,
it is the same as it ever was.
There is unbroken continuity,
why should I be out of mind
because I am out of sight?
I am waiting for you
somewhere very near
just around the corner.
All is well...
it is the same as it ever was.
There is unbroken continuity,
why should I be out of mind
because I am out of sight?
I am waiting for you
somewhere very near
just around the corner.
All is well...
Mick Moss
antimonger
But what about poems that you recite to pretty girls so that you may trick them into letting you take your balls for a shit in them?????
Eos
The Entwined
"Alone, but long I sat not, till my womb,
Pregnant by thee, and now excessive grown,
Prodigious motion felt and rueful throes.
At last this odious offspring whom thou seest,
Thine own begotten, breaking violent way,
Tore through my entrails, that, with fear and pain
Distorted, all my nether shape thus grew
Transformed; but he my inbred enemy
Forth issued, brandishing his fatal dart,
Made to destroy. I fled, and cried out Death!
Hell trembled at the hideous name, and sighed
From all her caves, and back resounded Death!"
Pregnant by thee, and now excessive grown,
Prodigious motion felt and rueful throes.
At last this odious offspring whom thou seest,
Thine own begotten, breaking violent way,
Tore through my entrails, that, with fear and pain
Distorted, all my nether shape thus grew
Transformed; but he my inbred enemy
Forth issued, brandishing his fatal dart,
Made to destroy. I fled, and cried out Death!
Hell trembled at the hideous name, and sighed
From all her caves, and back resounded Death!"
D Mullholand
[project closed]
no no, poems rule!!
emotions are shit. <-- talking about things of nature +( that's why we need poems... woopdidoo!
emotions are shit. <-- talking about things of nature +( that's why we need poems... woopdidoo!
Don Corleone
Emre
come on, girls fall for anything. even a little "you are the most beautiful thing i've ever seen" runs those hormones through their veins.
and if she likes you at first sight, then it's even EASIER. say something like "lets do something hot" and voila!
so mick, poems given to girls are USUALLY shit. dunc is right in his generalisation.
and if she likes you at first sight, then it's even EASIER. say something like "lets do something hot" and voila!
so mick, poems given to girls are USUALLY shit. dunc is right in his generalisation.
Bambi
Villain of the piece
look at the happy moron
he does'nt give a damn
I wish I was a moron
my god!! perhaps i am!!
poems rool,
he does'nt give a damn
I wish I was a moron
my god!! perhaps i am!!
poems rool,
Originally posted by Don Corleone
come on, girls fall for anything. even a little "you are the most beautiful thing i've ever seen" runs those hormones through their veins.
and if she likes you at first sight, then it's even EASIER. say something like "lets do something hot" and voila!
so mick, poems given to girls are USUALLY shit. dunc is right in his generalisation.
No girl replying on this one!!!
Are they agreeing with it wow
