Florida Powerfest with Theocracy

[Ryan M.]

I'm not sure my parents would approve lol. p.s. i got bored and I wrote this: (I know it's kind of lAME lol)

".-=[''-Midnight Walk-'']=-.

I'm taking a walk on a starless night.
Trying to find my way without a light.
I hear a scream and it fills me with fright.

I take a step and I fall into abyss.
I grab for the ledges but I always seem to miss.
I am at the end. What is all this?
I hit the bottom and something is amiss.

I rise once more.
I'm in the middle of a raging war.
What is this all for?
On the horizon I see a glowing door.

I reach for the handle.
It's so dark, I light a candle.

A cold win blows from the inside.
The shadows run amuck and I hide.
They're running oh so far and oh so wide.
They grab onto my back, taking me for a wild ride.
I shall cry more than I've ever cried.

Walking at midnight.
Walking without moonlight.
The darkness is filling me with fright.
The shadows choke out my sight.
You come in, to my delight.
Help me fight the endless fight.

Won't you unvail the sun for me.
Light the skies for all to see.
I don't want to be who I used to be.

Walking in your love so true.
It's the only thing I'll ever.
Live my life... ALL FOR YOU!

Never going to go on a midnight walk... AGAIN!"

 

[Craigsnedeker]

Oh wow ryan that rocks!! you made that up?!

 

[Craigsnedeker]

I'm not sure my parents would approve lol

I don't know any parent who would let a stranger pick up their kid, so no worries

 

[tshot99]

Still cant get over how awesome that concert was

 

[Ryan M.]

Oh wow ryan that rocks!! you made that up?!

yup did it in my spare time! I did a really long one the other day... hm... here it is. It's not my LONGEST! i can send you my longest in a private message cuz its almost as long as mirror of souls... but here is the one i recently did:

-=Nowhereland=-

[I- DRAGON]

Blood is dripping from the claws.
A circle of protection the monster draws.
Fire spewing from the eyes.
Telling me to believe the lies.
Finally do I realize.
He has the ability to hypnotize.
From the grave I see him rise.
Cries of fright the victim cries.
The creature is crawling through the night.
Filling all our souls with so much fright.
Causing us to lose all sight.
From the mouth I see a flame.
Burning away whatever you can name.
Maybe I'm the one to blame.
Tell me this is just a game.
Please tell me we're not the same!
I sail the seas of sin looking for the light.
I run through the darkness of the night.
I climb the mountains of glorious height.
I wonder the graveyard in so much fright.

[II- LOST]

I'm so lost in the endless realms of Nowhere Land.
There's no difference between air and land.
I can't see your helping hand...
... Reaching out for me today.
... But I can't see it, because It's Never day.
Lord won't you take it all away?
The dark clouds rolling past.
Rolling by oh so fast.
Nearing the very end at last.
Shattering my heart with a deafening blast.
A flicker on the distance.
A spark on the horizon.
I see it coming at me today.

[III- No Hope]

There's no hope for me.
I'm growing old and I can't see.
I'm left for dead.
leave me be!
I'm just a prisoner.
Never to be free.
I need savior to escape condemnation.
I don't want eternal damnation.
I need your glorious blood to wash me clean.
Wash my mind of all I've seen.

Plummet to the depths.
I can see the deaths.
Endlessly and consistently I fall.
Can you hear my helpless call?
From the very top of the shadowy wall.
I fell from a tower oh so tall.

I bowed down before my idols every day...
... When the very best idea was to stay away.
I chased temptation for all the years past.
I just kept on falling unbelievably fast.
Until I came to edge at last.
I now know there's little time to spare.
Finally I see the bloody tear..
I'm being pulled towards the edge.
I'm being thrown off the ledge.
Death is my only fear.
Cries of terror is all I hear.
Can you see the bloody tear?

HELP!
I need a rope to real me in.
HELP!
I need a savior for all my sin.
HELP!
I need to be cleansed within
... Save me from the plummet to the depths!
SAVE ME FROM THE ENDLESS REALMS OF NOWHERELAND!

 

[Craigsnedeker]

Wow that's awesome! I can see theocracy playing these songs =P Yeah send me that long song will ya? lol!

 

[Ryan M.]

I already sent you it... it was called age of abyss! did u delete it?? if so il just send another. Um... a little problem... I accidentally send you a forward of both the halves (it was too big 4 the limit) and one says "quoting ryan m" so lol... yeah. You have the orignial messages 2 though.... unless u deleted them.

 

[Craigsnedeker]

lol ok yeah I got all four

 

[Ryan M.]

Yikes. So sorry about that! My bad! Just got used to the system lol. I always mess up 100 times b4 gettin it rite lol

 

[Escapist]

You said you're fourteen, correct? You write quite well for that age! My stuff sounded like Evanescence rip-offs back then, bah! lol
(Perhaps they weren't that bad, but I'd not post them for people to read now! lol)

 

[Ryan M.]

thanks dude. I'm kind of new to writing. I've been writing these since like late july. and I've already written over 100... about 20 "masterpieces" so I'm really fast... well... not really... but I scribble all day long and at night put scribblings together.