I think that verse guitar nibbling thing will be technically enhanced (a bit more tense?), despite it serving the energy of the song like that. Some of the lyric sections are really cool and I hope they will stay, so Alexi won't change all the lines. Others are the usual modern Bodom, but yeah they're kinda ruining the song. Keep the rude parts and make the rest even more brutal, even more venomous spite and ruthlessness.
Slightly less keyboards would serve the song on certain parts, as it's pointless to smother a silky string line over rigid doomy riffs everytime. The keyboard at 1:12 and 1:20(?) is great, while the small piece at 0:25, 0:27, 0:29, 0:31 on beat one is not, remove those from between the riffs, rest of it is good. Maybe that Chinese chorus keyboard could be slightly sharper.