alright, here's my version:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1296348/dennis/hyperion.mp3
tell me what you like/dislike about the mix, so i can tailor it more to your preferences if you wish
i have to say though, the vocals were really difficult to mix. as a word of advice, try to be more aware of your levels. they were really quiet for the most part, and the sorta spoken sounding intro/middle section was waaaaaaaaay lower than everything else. try adjusting your mic preamp gain inbetween sections.....you should be aiming for around -6 dbfs peak level, and not go much quieter than like -15dbfs. also, as others already pointed out the vocal sound wasn't the best and required a lot of processing to get into the ballpark.
what's your vocal recording chain?
guitar DIs were fine. i didn't have any real problems or something....maybe also a bit on the quiet side. some bad edits on the bass DI too, try to pay more attention to proper crossfading
and last but not least, dude that song is rocking. i love death metal, especially the technical stuff, and you guys did a great job. reminds me of beneath the massacre at times, but with more laid back almost ambientish sections. loving it man, really cool stuff. thanks for sharing!
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1296348/dennis/hyperion.mp3
tell me what you like/dislike about the mix, so i can tailor it more to your preferences if you wish

i have to say though, the vocals were really difficult to mix. as a word of advice, try to be more aware of your levels. they were really quiet for the most part, and the sorta spoken sounding intro/middle section was waaaaaaaaay lower than everything else. try adjusting your mic preamp gain inbetween sections.....you should be aiming for around -6 dbfs peak level, and not go much quieter than like -15dbfs. also, as others already pointed out the vocal sound wasn't the best and required a lot of processing to get into the ballpark.
what's your vocal recording chain?
guitar DIs were fine. i didn't have any real problems or something....maybe also a bit on the quiet side. some bad edits on the bass DI too, try to pay more attention to proper crossfading

and last but not least, dude that song is rocking. i love death metal, especially the technical stuff, and you guys did a great job. reminds me of beneath the massacre at times, but with more laid back almost ambientish sections. loving it man, really cool stuff. thanks for sharing!