Vegard Pompey
ALLY TO GOOD, NIGHTMARE TO YOU
It's well-realized for what it is, purposeful and thematically cohesive and all that. But it's all just an exercise, a showcase of literary acrobatics. At best I can admire the cleverness of it and that's it. I think of it as the literary equivalent of "Inception" although I suppose most people wouldn't interpret that as criticism. The experimental formatting is honestly not something I think has a place in literature, at least not the way it is utilized in HoL. The formatting is not supposed to draw attention to itself because it's not supposed to be part of the text because formatting is not something that is going to have any emotional impact on me as a reader. The fact that the book itself is implied to be a labyrinth is also an issue I have with it because it implies that it is something for the reader to literally lose oneself in. To break the fourth wall in such a way and imply that degree of reader involvement to me is a gimmick that kills all suspension of disbelief. I don't understand how someone could ever feel unnerved to the point of having to shut their closet door before sleeping by a book that constantly calls attention to itself being a book.
@unknown I actually started writing this before I saw your post and it's funny that we both should mention Inception.
@unknown I actually started writing this before I saw your post and it's funny that we both should mention Inception.