The original poetry thread (yeah I'm a hippie, fuck off).

I was rhyming stoned with cone, thinking it was abab. My line doesn't have the correct rhythm to fit into a limerick...

i.e.
There once was a man from Nantucket
Whose head was the shape of a bucket.
He filled it with thought
and the things he was taught
duh-duhduh duh-duhduh duh-duhduh...
 
There once was a fellow named Ritter,
Who slept with a guidance transmitter.
It shriveled his cock,
Which fell off in his sock,
And made him exceedingly bitter.
 
There once was a fellow named Dick,
Whose head was as thick as a brick,
He liked Kayo Dot,
Though good they were not,
Still their asscracks he would lick.
 
there once was a man from nantucket
whose dick was so long he could suck it
one fateful day
he was heard to say
if his ear were a cunt he would fuck it
 
There once was a dude named Grahn
Who thought he was filled with brawn.
His tastes were heavy
Like an '88 Chevy
But, in truth, he liked Roy Khan.
 
i don't like poetry that much. sure, some of it is awesome, very respectable and all that, but i've never really been drawn to any particular form or author of it.
 
Trylakos said:
according to my gay english teacher, you can "fudge" it a bit it rhymes close enough:rolleyes:

all kinds of suitably established/gay poets have done this, so yeah i don't think theres much of a problem with it. artforms with 100% absolute rules = too limiting to be of any real value anyway :loco:
 
Demilich said:
all kinds of suitably established/gay poets have done this, so yeah i don't think theres much of a problem with it. artforms with 100% absolute rules = too limiting to be of any real value anyway :loco:
Demilich you're never on MSN
when will you be on again
you're fun to talk to
yahoo
 
i'm on now but don't talk to me ok? i'm studying. and RCing. but not talking. to anyone. why am i even on there?

thats it, i'm not on MSN.
 
LIST OF 10 POEMS THAT ARE UNRULY:
"The Waste Land" - T.S. Eliot
"The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" - T.S. Eliot
"Sunday Morning" - Wallace Stevens
"Ode to the West Wind" - Percy Shelley
"Kubla Khan" - Samuel Taylor Coleridge
"A Season in Hell" - Arthur Rimbaud
"The Rose Upon the Rood of Time" - W.B. Yeats
"Adam's Curse" - W.B. Yeats
"Spleen" - Charles Baudelaire
"Valediction: Forbidding Mourning" - John Donne
 
It contains one of the best lines in all poetry:

"I should have been a pair of ragged claws
Scuttling across the floors of silent seas."
 
stephen crane and pablo neruda = win

crane:

In the desert
I saw a creature, naked, bestial,
Who, squatting upon the ground,
Held his heart in his hands,
And ate of it.
I said: "Is it good, friend?"
"It is bitter - bitter," he answered;
"But I like it
Because it is bitter,
And because it is my heart."

* * *

I stood upon a high place,
And saw, below, many devils
Running, leaping,
and carousing in sin.
One looked up, grinning,
And said, "Comrade! Brother!"

neruda:

Tonight I can write the saddest lines.

Write, for example, 'The night is starry
and the stars are blue and shiver in the distance.'

The night wind revolves in the sky and sings.

Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
I loved her, and sometimes she loved me too.

Through nights like this one I held her in my arms.
I kissed her again and again under the endless sky.

She loved me, sometimes I loved her too.
How could one not have loved her great still eyes.

Tonight I can write the saddest lines.
To think that I do not have her. To feel that I have lost her.

To hear the immense night, still more immense without her.
And the verse falls to the soul like dew to the pasture.

What does it matter that my love could not keep her.
The night is starry and she is not with me.

This is all. In the distance someone is singing. In the distance.
My soul is not satisfied that it has lost her.

My sight tries to find her as though to bring her closer.
My heart looks for her, and she is not with me.

The same night whitening the same trees.
We, of that time, are no longer the same.

I no longer love her, that's certain, but how I loved her.
My voice tried to find the wind to touch her hearing.

Another's. She will be another's. As she was before my kisses.
Her voice, her bright body. Her infinite eyes.

I no longer love her, that's certain, but maybe I love her.
Love is so short, forgetting is so long.

Because through nights like this one I held her in my arms
my soul is not satisfied that it has lost her.

Though this be the last pain that she makes me suffer
and these the last verses that I write for her.

^^better in the original spanish, poetry doesn't translate well...would be a waste posting that here though