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Rain & Neon
Rain and neon licking the streets of Oblivion, US of A. Caressing the asphalt, promising nothing but sleep and whiskey sour. I find you in a bar called The Flytrap and you've already downed six shots, but you look me straight in the eye and say
"Yeah, she tried to kill me."
I can see no bruises on your face, no cuts or scars, but then you always were a fast healer.
"What now?" I ask as I wave to the bartender and ask him to bring me a shot. I gulp it down without even blinking. The grey smoke hovers above the rim of the shot glass and disperses as I slam it down on the counter.
"Nothing", you say and tap your fingers on the bar for another.
"You're sure she won't be coming after you? You're sure she's not going to be coming into this very bar sometime soon?"
"Why would she?"
"She tried to kill you. Remember?"
"Yeah. And let's just say ..."
You turn around on the stool. I see your eyes. They are very black.
"You took care of it ..." The words slip out of me; I cannot help myself.
The rain coming down outside in broad torrents, tapping, tapping, your fingers tapping on the counter.
"Maybe. Maybe not."
I look up, see the big mirror behind the bar. I look for your reflection and find it after several excruciating seconds. I let out a sigh, but then I realize I cannot see the bartender's reflection. His stark white shirt is very visible behind the counter, but not in the mirror. As I reach into my coat you put your hand on my arm, stopping me.
"Wait. Let me just order one more sour. He makes 'em damn fine, gotta give him that."
Rain and neon, blurring reality outside the windows. I really hope you killed her, lest we all have to die. You don't fall in love with them and you don't make friends with them.
As the bartender comes with your whiskey, you've already whipped out the cross and laid it on the counter.
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Rain & Neon
Rain and neon licking the streets of Oblivion, US of A. Caressing the asphalt, promising nothing but sleep and whiskey sour. I find you in a bar called The Flytrap and you've already downed six shots, but you look me straight in the eye and say
"Yeah, she tried to kill me."
I can see no bruises on your face, no cuts or scars, but then you always were a fast healer.
"What now?" I ask as I wave to the bartender and ask him to bring me a shot. I gulp it down without even blinking. The grey smoke hovers above the rim of the shot glass and disperses as I slam it down on the counter.
"Nothing", you say and tap your fingers on the bar for another.
"You're sure she won't be coming after you? You're sure she's not going to be coming into this very bar sometime soon?"
"Why would she?"
"She tried to kill you. Remember?"
"Yeah. And let's just say ..."
You turn around on the stool. I see your eyes. They are very black.
"You took care of it ..." The words slip out of me; I cannot help myself.
The rain coming down outside in broad torrents, tapping, tapping, your fingers tapping on the counter.
"Maybe. Maybe not."
I look up, see the big mirror behind the bar. I look for your reflection and find it after several excruciating seconds. I let out a sigh, but then I realize I cannot see the bartender's reflection. His stark white shirt is very visible behind the counter, but not in the mirror. As I reach into my coat you put your hand on my arm, stopping me.
"Wait. Let me just order one more sour. He makes 'em damn fine, gotta give him that."
Rain and neon, blurring reality outside the windows. I really hope you killed her, lest we all have to die. You don't fall in love with them and you don't make friends with them.
As the bartender comes with your whiskey, you've already whipped out the cross and laid it on the counter.