That's actually pretty damn good, man, it definitely has the Opeth feel to it! I can just hear the heavy guitars kicking in at the end of it.
You should finish that piece, it's got some real potential!
Shit... I need to get off my ass and buy an mbox or a freakin' tone port already and start recording stuff. I've been stuck in cover band hell for so long, I've forgotten how much fun it is to work on your own shit!
Very nice! I demand that you follow up with a ten minute death metal song that begins in the same key and is in the style of the MAYH-era. It's practically begging to lead directly into something like that.
I don't think I will ever write more to it though. The thing is I don't really enjoy writing music. This little piece is written about 2-3 years ago, back when I still had dreams of being able to make a living of playing music. And at that time I would really force myself to try and write something, never really enjoying it. Writing music is hard work, believe me hehe.