hey man,
had a few listens through things - heres some general feedback (as I said on myspace things are a bit hectic today so i'll be able to give some better feedback tomorrow)...
Sounds like the floor tom has been replaced with the ride bell on there - if you could swap that round it'd be great (if theres a mistake with that midi drum file read me just let me know and i'll amend) I'd again see if could make the toms slightly punchier in the mix - I kinda like the drum sound on some of the newer august burns red/or again take some black dahlia stuff as an influence
The ending the echo kind of effect could work quite well - i'd be tempted to include quite a bit more of it as the track comes to a close and have like a really epic echoey type feel to it? or maybe you could possibly loop the synth track/leave that running with the echo effect - after all its gonna be the last track on the album
again just thoughts!
Again i'd personally probably change that final drum bar, but if you wanted to have that kinda slower half time feel think it needs an extra kick drum note programmed in there
aside from that sounds pretty damn good - cheers!