The Creativity Thread

I figure I'd revive this dying thread because I had a lot of free time at work last week and I ended up making my first full song parody of DT (lyrics only of course)

There it is, I rendered Tongues a surrealist and ridiculous stream of words.

The original:

Tongues, lost in me
yours be the sharp and the vile
Glide ‘neath my skin
storm through my nerves

I bury the nomad years
hours in the earth
couldn't exorcise these searing, pecking tongues
Immune you say
yet venom strikes in strangest guises
as the viper in our eyes
Tongue, throat, tongue
slayer of the word and stealer of vision

A monumental reign of terrors
throats slit up to stain the target
We're food for the hounds of trauma,
prey to the crows of stress

No power left to retrieve my stolen language
filtered through the illiterate fingers of death

Flies
let sickness be poured
from the cupped hands of bedlam
To gather the fruits, fruits from my words

On account of their brightness
I made friends with the word and the moon
went with the tide and left for the sound
of dead instruments thrown out of tune

The red squared patterns, dragonrise and
evenclaw
decoying from pandemonic symmetry

Let ring
a dissonant note in the music of the spheres
the streak of promise in the nuclear sky
These whipping black tongues
aching to lick me back to life redefined
to inject their truths within me now



and the...yeah.

Pogs, lasting fee
Years beat a shark in one mile
Glad knee mask in
Stormtroop might serve

High berry denim made ears
Ours indie hurt
Covert exercise migs soaring, fishing pogs
Hymn under sleigh
Niet vein aims truck estrange gauges
Taz the victor inner highs
Pog, trout, pog
Slay her on the board and stiller night vision

Amon Amarth peng off beaver
Frog lit up toasting tar net
Weird foot forge hinds often raw
Play-doh deploys Hostess

No plow a theft tourist thrive maelstrom anal gauge
Phil third true dill uttered figures of debt

Miles,
Of pointless bee porn
Form the topped enough bed lamb
Together the roost of beamsword

On a count of debried Ness
High maid Fred Wayne's World under moo
When twit divid an elf on the ground
Undead excrements snowing in june

Thorough squaw hard Patton
Drag and rise that Robert Shaw
Decor yin from pan demon ink sim a tree

Lettering
Add his son ant noting Dimmu's lick off Disfear's
District off pro miss indie new Clarisse tie
Daze weeping backbones
A king tool ink Maibec to lie Fred is fine
Towing jet their routes waiting meow
 
can't get the myspace song to play. the page loads and all but then nothing happens, no matter how many times i press play. is it me or the page/something temporary?
 
Pretty cool video! Havent listened to the songs yet, but the clip is interesting, a few cool drum sequences, too :)
 
Ah no, it's a historic document by Snorri Sturlusson detailing Viking mythology and beliefs as well as some poetic references to legends of the era. I used techniques such as opening on random pages and finding note letters in certain lines to develope the piece.
 
satan made me do this. sorry.

the warrior and the dancer

you have a good singing voice
i have anger in spades
you glide and i delve

above and below
except that it is
basically
not true

you only listen to me
when i don't say a thing
then again
most people do

i listen to you
but you don't speak
is it always
like that for you?

you are enthralled by the harmonic
i'm just enthralled by you

we are no match
 
Whoa, that was a good one. At first I was a bit skeptical, as I've heard way too many Requiem of a Dream covers and remixes and shit, but you managed to make it sound both different and true to the original at the same time. A great song.

-Villain