Break the Silence - Legend (Metalcore - in the vein of BMTH and MMF)

[Wunderlust]

Hey guys what's up? I'm been lurking for a while and never really felt the need to get an account here. So I'm new. Trash me as much as you want about that. Oh and anyway I've got a song that I've written that I'd like you to check out. Let me know what you think about it, and also what you think of Break the Silence as the band name! And of course comments specific stuffs like the production would also be appreciated!



Thanks in advance dudes and dudettes
EDIT: Changed band name, what do you guys think of the change?

 

[MANDREWtheBARBARIAN]

Not a big fan of the clean vocals. The tone is off, IMO. Dirty vocals sound good. Arrangement is pretty good. I really like the intro. I'd suggest a bigger hit at the 2:30 mark. Overall nice job.

 

[Wunderlust]

Not a big fan of the clean vocals. The tone is off, IMO. Dirty vocals sound good. Arrangement is pretty good. I really like the intro. I'd suggest a bigger hit at the 2:30 mark. Overall nice job.

Appreciate the kind words man, any word on what it is about the vocals that rubs you the wrong way?