I'm in a competion named "Poets of Future" in my school.I wrote something about love but I dont have any idea about is it good or bad.Im writing it now and say its good or bad please
It was a silent night,
When I was looking at the shadows,
Something came,
Lights of moon were showing her beauty
Oh,it was an Angel
Fallen from innocence,
God,it's miracle,
With her white wings
With her venomed lips
With her dark eyes,
She was torturing me every night,
I couldn't forget her.
Who are you?
What are you?
Are you the one who rescues me from my nightmares?
She smiled,
I couldnt look at her
I didn't have courage to do it,
Her eyes were like a teeth,biting me.
Venom of love was in my veins now.
Surrendering me,
Torturing me,
But years past,and she didn't came
Life seemed dull
No reason to live,
No reason to breath,
Drinking was my only option
There was only one escape from this madness,it was death.
Scythes of Death stabbed in me,
I didnt mind about sacrifing myself
Cause at least we would be together...
It was a silent night,
When I was looking at the shadows,
Something came,
Lights of moon were showing her beauty
Oh,it was an Angel
Fallen from innocence,
God,it's miracle,
With her white wings
With her venomed lips
With her dark eyes,
She was torturing me every night,
I couldn't forget her.
Who are you?
What are you?
Are you the one who rescues me from my nightmares?
She smiled,
I couldnt look at her
I didn't have courage to do it,
Her eyes were like a teeth,biting me.
Venom of love was in my veins now.
Surrendering me,
Torturing me,
But years past,and she didn't came
Life seemed dull
No reason to live,
No reason to breath,
Drinking was my only option
There was only one escape from this madness,it was death.
Scythes of Death stabbed in me,
I didnt mind about sacrifing myself
Cause at least we would be together...