eveningninja
Skull Kid
Anyway, I'd love some specific comments/suggestion on a new song I'm working on, please take a look if you can, guys!
http://www.sendspace.com/file/1p78zd
I think your music needs to go one of two ways. Either have more relatability in its structure, or vary up your rhythms/syncopation more so that it sounds more interesting. A few of the violin riffs you play at whatever point in the song are just heard one time right then and there (making me think you're going for a progressive touch), and yet the song still doesn't sound that diverse because the rhythms of your different lines are either the same or very similar.
An example of something that I think could work if you go with a more structured route - take that intro riff you play on the violin, and perhaps have it played on guitar later on, while with violin you play a different melody/line/chords atop it. You wouldn't be repeating anything in a traditional sense, retaining the avant-garde feel, but at the same time listeners would feel a sense of recollection and it would sound more like a "song."