Great atmosphere and the acoustic guitars sound so sweet! This is a very cool beginning for your "journey"
Only thing (as mentioned before) is the snare in combination with the accented guitars - it's a little too much for my taste. But that's only my opinion... Oh, and one more (minor) thing... at ~2:09 there is one weird (detuned?) sounding note that sticks out a little bit.
Overall I really like it very much and can't wait for the final product!
Thank you very much, dude! Okay..you are the third sneapster who find the snare too brutal Oh yeah..at 2:09 this also annoys me, but this is easy to repair. For me the song is still one single construction zone.