So I'm still trying to work my way through Dan Simmons' Fall of Hyperion. I think the story is very engaging and the ideas are unique, but Simmons is really starting to get on my nerves, mostly for the following reason: he always identifies an allusion after he uses it. Every time a character quotes a famous writer, Simmons has another character say "Oh, Yeats." Or after Gladstone gives a very familiar speech and asks how it was, someone says "Very inspirational; and borrowed from Churchill."
Fuck Simmons, we all know you're a learned, intelligent scholar. There's no need to remind us every time you drop a damned quote. It's insulting to the intelligence of the reader.