Alright I think my Nonverbal Communication prof is purposely out there to thwart my every move. I just finished writing the exam (which was rather easy and I think my work is worth an A- at least) and got my term essay back. I managed an A- (good grade, but the class is so ridiculously easy an A should have been an simple achievement). The problem I had with his marking is that most of his major complaints stem from my use of film analysis terms like 'diegesis' or 'self-reflexive' in which I did not define directly but expected my reading audience to be capable of comprehending. I seriously doubt not defining such terms is worth knocking marks off for, especially when this is a 2nd year university course in which academic writing style should be expected, and defining such basic film terminology seems utterly stupid for a paper which is only to read by some dude with a humanities PhD. It's not like I didn't utilize adequate examples to justify my use of these terms either, so their meaning should not be shrouded in any mystery even the prof was too lazy to look up their definitions.
Moreover, I also went above and beyond and did some actual research for my essay, which I didn't seem to get rewarded for either.
Do you think its fair for a prof to deduct marks for writing 'too academically' (he actually cites this as a complaint in his comments) and for not defining terms so intrinsic with proper film analysis?