downloading, will comment soon.
edit: Sounds good overall, but there are some things that bother me a bit, and fixing them could make the track sound better... Nothing personal, but you know, I'm a bit of a vocal nazi as most of the regular people mainly listen to the vocals and if the source material is better than good, it's easier to work on the material to make the end product sound closer to stellar.
- Vocalchain
What microphone are you using, and are you compressing on the way in? The vocals sound pretty muffled, like there is no sizzle on the esses or anything, it might be from overcompression with too fast attack settings but if there is none, then I guess it is the microphone. If it's something like SM58, can you try to get a hold of a large diaphram condenser microphone?
- Articulation
The change of microphone might change some of this, but the articulation sounds maybe a bit too round and stretched (like instead of "tiger" it sounds more like "thaiga" and "diamonds" sound like "diemoth"), compared where the dio's articulation is very straightforward cubical, which makes it sound maybe a bit more agressive. So if you just can, maybe even over-articulate a little on the consonants, but don't lose the mojo over it.
- Emotion
This one is a minor thing, but in the beginning where there are the hums ("uuu, yeah-i-yeah" and when there is the "jump jump" later on before the solo), could you try to make them sound a bit more emotional. The part with "gotta get away" was very good on the emotion part, but the "holy diver" part after that was maybe a bit over, but in Finland we have this saying "mielummin överit kun vajarit", which means something like "rather over than under".