***The Official Let's write a story discussion thread***

[ahjteam]

Khnum rose from between his mother's breasts, and fapped insanely until a splash of clotted mother's milk.

Doesn't make any sense

 

[cobhc]

We may need to change it before it's published

 

[GarethSE]

Am I the only one who think the mistakes make it all the funnier?

 

[SimonTaddio_Qc]

Sometimes it just sounds like something Skwisgar from Dethklok could have said

 

[FIXXXER]

Am I the only one who think the mistakes make it all the funnier?

yeah, i thought ESPECIALLY the non sense
in this was the funny and good thing about it

 

[Ashgarth]

It's like that south park episode, when they write a really gross book and it's a best-seller hahaha

 

[GarethSE]

The best sense is nonsense.

 

[FIXXXER]

The best sense is nonsense.

but only if you force at least one orangutan
to build orignal swiss cuckoo clocks in your backyard!

 

[cobhc]

The best sense is nonsense.

This makes sense.

 

[DanLights]

I love how this is turning out, but a couple times some dudes have broken the 3 word rule, and that kinda blows out the fun, just sayin

 

[cobhc]

It's super hard for me to not constantly chime in with "that doesn't work" or "that's not grammatically correct" or "that really just does not work" all the time - there are some serious errors in that thing, some by a self-acclaimed "English Language Nazi."

Haha, didn't see this until now. Yeah, I'm a bit of a hypocrite sometimes, but at least I admit it.

 

[ahjteam]

I updated the story. It's getting long.

 

[GarethSE]

I must print out a copy of this and start handing it out to many hippies, faery folk and generally drugged up people that congregate in Cornwall.. They would all appreciate a work of this magnitude \m/

 

[ahjteam]

the giant cock handed pirate

is the pirate or the cocks giant?

 

[DaveBlack]

lol I love it. It's like reading one of those crazy emails you get when they just throw words together to beat the spam filters. I used to find those things hilarious.

 

[Ashgarth]

is the pirate or the cocks giant?

The giant cock handed pirate, the pirate is a giant, his hands are cocks, big cocks as he is a giant...hahahaha

 

[DanLights]

I love how all of a sudden we're in CHAPTER 2

 

[ahjteam]

whats with the fucking space onions? did I miss a meme or something?

 

[MP125]

Haha, I'm not sure. I don't think there is one.

 

[StoneLord]

William Burrows would be so proud.