Lyrics. English questions.

[Skinny Viking]

^ you TOTALLY missed the joke buddy!

 

[ratsapprentice]

I hesitated at first because I thought there was one, but couldn't find it!

 

[DanLights]

Hahaha it's clear as water, you do seem stupid sometimes (see wat I did thar?)

 

[ratsapprentice]

After actually reading your post.....









FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

 

[Jevil]

How the fuck do you pronounce this word? TRILOBITE

Trilobit, Trilobait, Trailobait? And where do you stress it?

 

[ratsapprentice]

TRY-LOW-BITE

what a random word to want to know hahah

 

[TheDriller]

How the fuck do you pronounce this word? TRILOBITE

Trilobit, Trilobait, Trailobait? And where do you stress it?

Try

Low

Bite

 

[Jevil]

Thanks.

Yes ratsapprentice, very random. Hahaha
It is for a sci-fi lyric about a guy who enter a time hole and appears in the Cambrian era, alone, and he gets trapped there, 500 millions years ago.

 

[Skinny Viking]

^ he probably would have died almost immediately anyway ... can't breathe

 

[Jevil]

^ he probably would have died almost immediately anyway ... can't breathe

Not in the Precambian, but in Cambiarn era was a O2 explosion, and that made artropodes and brackens started to born so there are several hypothesis that atmosphere gases could be close to nowadays.

 

[Jevil]

What about this sentence?

'We cling to a chance of life' does it make any sense in english?

 

[ratsapprentice]

Yes, but it might not mean what you want it to, depending on the context.

 

[Jevil]

Yes, but it might not mean what you want it to, depending on the context.

The context is how we, humans, always clutch to life even in the hardest situations.

 

[ratsapprentice]

Yes, but the actual verse/sentences that it is put in may not make sense...

 

[grywolf627]

What about this sentence?

'We cling to a chance of life' does it make any sense in english?

Made sense to me even without knowing its context. It's fine.

 

[ratsapprentice]

Yeah, it makes sence on it's own.
But, IN CONTEXT it might be wrong.

 

[Keregioz]

That's weird...I was about to resurrect this thread too .

Is this right?: "I can't see your colors, but neither can you see mine"

 

[Perishh]

It would typically be written:

But you cant see mine: or
Nor can you see mine

 

[DanLights]

That's weird...I was about to resurrect this thread too .

Is this right?: "I can't see your colors, but neither can you see mine"

normally it would be "neither can you" or "you can't see mine either", but I'm pretty sure your option is perfectly fine

 

[Keregioz]

I'm sure it's not the typical way to write it, but let's say that for the purpose of the song I need to write it that way, is it something I can get away with or am I better off trying to find something else?