The best thing about NMF is the first few seconds when that magical live intro ties together with the song, I can see an inferno of flames when listening to it, pyros licking through the eyesockets of skulls, and the hihats or whatever are very creative - the first seven seconds. After that, the song transcends into something that frighteningly reminds of thrash and then come the horrendous vocals. A few nice melodies and riffs here and there and a flashy guitar solo, but the overall thrashyness is the curse that spoils the song. The worst thing is the pre-chorus with the thrashy slamming and group shouts. I'd also prefer the first chorus melody without vocals, then go with another one with the vocals. Also I think the intro riffing that carries through the song should have maybe some choir background too cos it's just too boring otherwise. And the usual problem with this album, there's no interesting background for the solos so it's just *sigh*. So if I made this song I'd create a better pre-chorus and apply the other things I mentioned. The only vocal part that I particurly enjoy is this 4:28 - 4:32 because it somehow gels with the music. The band would probably think who's this annoying gay nerd little bitch trying to improve our art... I'm not saying I could do better, but it's just my personal ideas always as one fan on where they could still improve in striving for perfection.