Jester313
Clad in shadows
From a grammar standpoint Colony is superior to Clayman which is why I prefer it lyrically. Clayman is great but has a few strange verses which probably would have benefited from an experienced eye going over them first.
I disagree here. I think really the only grammar issues on Clayman might be subject/verb agreement with regards to when he uses plurals. For example (but really, this is still found in his lyrics today) "Run-down memoirs is all that's left". It should be "memoirs are all that's left." Also, I don't think he knows when to use distance and distant.