Dig it? Criticism welcomed.
Lyrics so far:
doom across the way
can you see him, see his face?
standing next to you
his hands, reaching through...
can you see his face?
doom has come to chase
give up your feeble life for doom
run, run away
try as you may
never will you escape from doom
this unholy night has your soul
it has gripped you tight, it's in control
wreaking havoc on your trembling mind
leaving you among the dead mankind
Cheesy but what the hell.
Finishing up a sample of a song Damian/Melodeath and I are randomly working on called "Doom Across The Way"...as the title implies, it's in the style of trad-doom and epic metal. It is him on guitar and me on vocals and drum programming.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/150898299d8835b2/
Enjoy! Feedback wanted.
EDIT: I have decided that the name of this project will be Arbiter. Who knows what else we'll do when this is done.
It's adequate, though, and fits the music. Anyway, it's not like your audience is going to be the Oxford University English department.